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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough 
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Undeniably, I spin Unashamed, you enjoy If I could reach inside, would I find a heart? Or just something cold, and wretched? Where do you matriculate from? Is there a spring of evil, horrible things somewhere in the darkness? If so, I have obviously been wet, and saturated by the fluid terror. Unashamed, I love Without conscience, you let me All the while knowing, that you will never return what you take. My muscles contract in soreness at the strength that it has taken to hold onto you. My veins scream for oxegen, because your hate smothers me from within. Unashamed, I admit Proud, you watch As I walk away knowing that you could never love without destroying us both. [This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (08-26-2003 11:48 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This has a punch.. I liked this the most, though.. "Unashamed, I love Without conscience, you let me" It spoke volumes.. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice penning n read,, |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
This has a lot of great lines, and I would probably end up copying the whole poem down if I tried to point them all out. I really enjoyed how, with few words, you were able to depict a situation so very clearly. I will read more of you!  Nicole |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Tima, Good God Woman! This person sounds just plain eeevveeell My muscles contract in soreness at the strength that it has taken to hold onto you. yes, I do know this kind of hurt also you are amazing keep your head up xxoo |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Intense! |
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