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fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

0 posted 2003-08-23 06:26 PM

feelings superfluous
let me not blame myself
but look to myself
as another self
he is to blame
or take responsibility
but throw responsibility
to another self
he is responsible               you are all lazy
                                i do the work around here
let me dodge the bullets        you just go and play
as another victim
let me victimize
behind a shell of illness
it is to blame
it will take responsibility
I am not responsible
let me see myself
as another self

he is shooting the bullets
feelings superfluous

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
--Smit
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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-23 07:15 PM

Great write..

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

2 posted 2003-08-23 10:26 PM

"let me not blame myself
but look to myself
as another self
he is to blame
or take responsibility
but throw responsibility
to another self
he is responsible"

Sounds like the very antithesis of self-actualized - I enjoyed this poem. It made me think, and I went on a very detailed and wild analysis of this piece *chuckling*. Very cool

Nicole

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