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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Shrouded bones throwing stones skipping stream across the nothing - ness - essary dreams Wisp of wind through weathered wings longing to touch down again [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-16-2003 11:56 PM).] |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
a strange coupling of two distince poems, in my opinion. a lot to think on. -majnu |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
nothing - ness - essary nice wordplay and i see what manju is saying..disjointed images but i like how you put them together |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
thanks guys . . . disjointed thoughts for sure and yes they do read as two seperate ideas . . . xxoo |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
reminded me of sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me...was that the saying? what a load of cobblers....words can kill... this to me...has a feeling of isolation and hopelessness, and still, a determination.  stop making me think so much!!! Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahahhaa whoever made up that rhyme is ill . . . I would rather have had sticks and stones tossed at me than words, any day Thanks gem xxoo |
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