an open field - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Poetic Haven

an open field

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-08-14 11:20 AM

blue tinted visions
an open field barren
what thoughts may grow
are quickly extirpated
or buried under idled soil

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2003-08-14 06:50 PM

Wonderful images Sir Raph.

It's always a pleasure reading you m'friend.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-08-15 03:06 AM

Hey,
this..this I'm diggin.

It's not so often
that you have these kind of words..
Well, that's just me..you're always good..

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

3 posted 2003-08-15 07:48 PM

See? Whenever I write, it's just a barren field - heh, maybe a weed here and there.

I like this, nicely done.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-08-16 04:47 AM

Thanks Maree you know the feeling's mutual

Thanks Meg glad its dug, dig?

Thanks Nicole appreciate it. nice comments and a little self depreciation.. grins

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2003-08-18 06:36 PM

hmmmmmm. strawberry fields forever?

nope this field sounds like the kind of hellish field i am living in.

liking, no loving this one for reasons i cannot explain. except of course b cos its good, but y know woorra mean right?

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

6 posted 2003-08-18 09:34 PM

heh..'I dug it.' heh heh. I really did

insanity is not a crime

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2003-08-19 08:09 AM

Idle soil? or Barren? ( chuckling)

nice short piece to make one think Raph..as usual... I enjoyed

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-08-19 02:20 PM

thanks everbody..i'll just leave it open to interpretation

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.