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Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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0 posted 2003-07-30 05:28 PM

Zebra

"Hey,
Mr Auto Car,
why'd ya make the Zebra cross?"
Its oh such an awful loss
and you'll never even count the cost
of your insobriety.

A disturbing lack of creativeness

I like to sleep
I like to leap with sheep
I gently creep
Into deep sleep
by counting leaping sheep.

Just having a bit of a laugh really

Andy

Rawr, rawr, rawr

LoveBug

Moderator

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2003-08-04 07:45 PM

No replies? Aww
I thought it was cute!! I think you're cute too! oooh.. I'm full of surprises, ain't I?

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2003-08-05 01:39 AM

Careful Erica, he's a strange one... *grin*

The zebra part still throws me lol

It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in

Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 2003-08-05 03:32 PM

Zebra's are cool.. I want to keep one as a pet.

Can I keep you instead? You're a cutie.

Nice work, this made me smile.

"As a group, no one would call poets a particularly bubbly, chipper group."
James Pennebaker (psych prof.)

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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4 posted 2003-08-05 05:22 PM

Erica: Thanks for the reply, I really wasn’t expecting any replies, these were kind of “working myself back into writing kind of poems” rather than a serious attempt at writing, though I do think that they came out wonderfully. Cute

Rhonda: Thanks for the reply, I thought you said this was too weird to reply to, I could probably explain the Zebra thing to you on MSN if you wanted. Strange… :tounge:

Allysa: Thanks for the reply, I’m sorry to tell you that it would be impossible for you to own me as I’m public property, you could however buy a Zu Doll at your local toy store

. Cute

Andy

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

5 posted 2003-08-08 02:44 PM

Heya Zu! I hate those little uncreative poems but for some reason, I liked yours. Especially the second one. The first is a bit difficult to follow, but the second one is catchy and I like the confession made by its title.

On a side note... yeah, you are a cutie. Can I keep you too? Just kidding...

Parasite

Faith is a fine invention
When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.
~~~Emily Dickinson

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