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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Never fruitful in my desire to strip core of you from this garden The melancholy rot has passed my week slower still You will feed and I may starve I crave in rememberance scent of the bloom where I paced waiting to be picked. Instant karma's gonna get you. [This message has been edited by gemjop (07-29-2003 06:14 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
scary. I was just pulling weeds a minute ago. I'm following you Gumdrop  mwahahaha!! see? isn't it fun back here? good write..and that bubble blowing thing was scary. aghh..gonna give me nightmares. I was just listening to a song called blue and yellow. my favorite colors..never heard it before. heh. i am basicaly just talking to you...what do you want me to say? i worship your poetry? you already know that  "and it's all in how you mix the two..it burns a whole through everyone that feels it.." insanity is not a crime [This message has been edited by Wind (07-29-2003 06:19 PM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
bittersweet gem |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool use of metaphor and imagery here poetess gem...me thinks its time to plant a new garden, hire a tanned and tattooed hottie to do the work for you. LOL  "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
lol @ janet marie's response...*daydreams now* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Yeesh JM is sex all you think about? If so contact me quick!! lol |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
lol, i was gonna say that! she's great aint she? GREAT idea JM...youre my kinda lady...always game for perving at a buff body, or not. lol, anything'll do. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL...seems that way dont it Raph... I dont know whats come over me  It must be all the raspberry tea... I swear that stuff does something to me LOL (call me at 555-raging hormones) LMAO Ok.. Ill TRY to be good... Gem.. i used to have a landscape company... lots of brown hard bodies to play in the dirt with.... Now that was one job where I could throw my self into my work haha Oh..yeah... I said I was gonna behave....  (any body falling for it?) lol [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (07-30-2003 04:16 PM).] |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
A really interesting read, thanks for sharing it with us  Andy |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
i am ALWAYS late, it never fails...ever. what can i say that hasn't already been said.....great write...i loved it. riley *the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time* |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Gem? to me..this doesn't sound quite right..Raph says "Yeesh JM is sex all you think about? If so contact me quick!! lol" and you say "lol, i was gonna say that!" ok..am I the only one who noticed that?  . insanity is not a crime |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Ahh, weeds... parasites of the plant world. How could I not be sympathetic, hm? I like how you wrote it. Particularly this line: quote: Yes... strange how you make this relationship with the weed out to be a competition for survival. I very much like that, I doubt most gardeners put so much thought into it. Very nice work, Gempop, this is the first I've read from you and I'm not disappointed. I look forward to seeing more of you. Parasite Faith is a fine invention |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sexy stuff, there. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I like. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hmmm...I don't know, I took it in a completely non-sexual way. But what I did see, I loved...I won't go into all of it, for time's sake. Just know I read it and really appreciated it.~Carly "How inimitably graceful children are in general before they learn to dance!" |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
All the sex talk made me think of the poor boy/man that came to my door selling cleaner once.....but that is a story in itself... loved the writing! Susan |
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