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To Medusa |
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You dared to cling to a fallible joy. You were revealed in deceit and mourning. When all that mattered was taken away, your face torn and grim, a god's taunts made flesh. What gave you the bravery to find a new grace? What sense of mercy -- uprooting fools' cities. How did you stare back? The knowledge to break contrivance with stone. How did you stare back? We are all monsters, mourning and mourning. We dare to cling to fallible joys. Part of no aegis, hubris, sins foolish. We dare to cling to fallible joys. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
MIKEY!!!!! I missed ya me groovy boyeeeeeee welcome back!!! Part of no aegis, hubris, sins foolish. We dare to cling to fallible joys. love that verse...yer so kewl "I'm good at two things and this is the other one." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I hesitate to say that I'm back, as I still use ASOTS more often. But it's nice to be welcomed, and thank you for reading, Janet. Mike |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your unique use of phrases and imagery is definitely missed here my friend. I know you're at the 'other place', but there are a lot of people here who miss you and appreciate your talent. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I agree with Janet Marie; yer so kewl and so is your poem Mike. enjoyed it very much and it's wonderful to read you again. More is good Maree fate is not just |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
aw...you have been missed. This was like water after a night of tequila. (that's a GOOD thing.) The repetition added the impact, and the way you did it? implied question and thought. smiling, spotted our squirrel in a tree I did, and oh my heart leapt for joy. love ya mikie. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . and here she is in all her beauty Mikey . . . xxoo |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
EXQUISITE!! |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I love your choice of subject. Medusa is a perfect example, isn't she? Once beautiful and proud, but transformed by Athena for making whoopie in her temple. But she, as you say, found a new pride. I don't know either, how she could overcome shame and stare back and turn people into stone... but it's truly thought-provoking... we turn our most hated and loathesome elements into objects of pride... we gloat them, we stare back at people and turn them to stone because THAT is our pride, despite our ugliness. What do you mean by "part of no aegis" though? I mean, I'm familiar with the fact that Medusa's head was put at the center of the Aegis once she was slain, but how does that apply to people in general? Maybe I'm not looking deep enough, forgive me if that's so... You're right. We dare to cling to fallible joys. And like Medusa, we're going to lose them, and suffer the consequences. Oh so nicely done, Mikey... you see? Nobody can do this but you... and it's so, so nice to have you back. Parasite Faith is a fine invention |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hey there, Mikey! So good to see you around here again...you were missed. And this poem...just WAY cool...I love it! No one does it quite like you. Stick around and share some more...will ya? "So here I am with pockets full of good intentions |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
We are all monsters, mourning and mourning. We dare to cling to fallible joys. loved this but then it's unfair to pick so few out of the many. stay awhile squirrel dude |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
You know I had to comment on this poem, didn't ya? awesome. ~Tier |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ha! Your words, and the ways you string them ARE missed here. And? It's always nice to see the Tiersdin as well. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
hearhear to the poem and hearhear to the replies hope you stay man |
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