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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
 another test! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow what a picture! Haunting  M |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is an incredible picture and your words brought shivers. My only comment would be that I found it a bit hard to read as the font size is small, but then, I'm getting on in years and my eyes aren't what they used to be!  Hugs, Marti |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
What's that from? "Something wicked this way comes?" It sounds extremely familiar... I, too, like the photo and I, too, found it a bit difficult to read, but it made me lean forward and get a better look at the picture itself so it's all good. Very much like the meter you chose, I think it was a perfect pace for the ominous, foreboding intent of the piece... very cool stuff, PdV. Parasite Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The line is from the book of the same name by Ray Bradbury. The photo is from a news site that had photos taken in space by the Hubble. I have a few more but this one was spooky... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
yes . . . nice story indeed it is and Sharon God this gave me the creeps not the writing - the image awesome job xxoo |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh how cool is this... like LP I loved the meter and cadence of this...it danced off the tongue when read aloud... and the pic is the perfect accompanyment. Youre getting too good at the poetic post cards All I can feel is this distance between you and me. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great work... spooky too... regards sudhir |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This makes me feel really small in the whole scheme of things, somehow. I am a hubble freak myself, but never dared to try to put words to any of the photos in my collection. That's what I like about you, Sharon, you are always up to any challenge. I hope you were shooting for "eerie" with this because that's what you got (I mean that in a good way, you know).Anyway, just stopped by to say "hi" and stuff. Michael |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Smooch Michael. It's nice to see you here!! |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I like your picture. It certainly adds an air of darkness to the poem. The mental imagery created by the poem also serves to enhance the image. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
LOL...I glanced at your title quickly, thought it said, "Photo from Hubbie" and wondered what I'd missed!!!  |
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