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Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2003-04-04 03:41 PM

darkest in the hour night
through the window into it will we fly
consoled and frozen in the time
laugh at the face that haunts you
it follows your every thoughtin head
crushing dreams you once thought had
underneath it all they are still the same
don't count on the cover to kill the pain
your body shakes uncontrollably
as the tears of blood roll down
at the mercy of the one they call master

given up the life i lived
for the pain i know all to well

Windows stained with the fog, words written in by a girl.

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2003-04-07 11:05 AM

Powerful, Ri... you've still got it, babe.

Very cool writing, keep it up.

Parasite

God becomes as
we are that we
may be as he
is
~William Blake

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2003-04-07 04:06 PM

Funny I expected this to be nothing. I wrote it when I was mad and read it again, its perty darn good. Thanks for replyin Brian. Check out my one in Open, its even evilier ( is that a word? )

Riley

Windows stained with the fog, words written in by a girl.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2003-04-07 05:08 PM

Great Work Riley, I really enjoyed it.

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