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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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once was love mixed up between one and three like lemonade could be sweet always sour it might be that love wasn't always ment to be the subject of manipulative actions but instead of acting childish drinking and spilling the stickyness all down your face you could not that you will act more adult like you actually belong here maybe you should drink tea instead Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... [This message has been edited by Riley (11-29-2002 03:56 PM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
awesome, Riley. Just what I was hoping to get from this one... lemonade as a reference to age. It's cool how you write about growing up when you're still 13 years old yourself. Don't let yourself grow up too fast, girl... Awesome work, and welcome to Sanctuary!  Parasite Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good job!! You do have a wise outlook on life.... Now a question: What made you italize certain words? I've used this method myself so I wonder why you chose those words to make different.  |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
LP: Me growing up to fast...hehe, don't worry about that PoetDeVine: I think I chose to make those words different because they are almost like thoughts...set aside from the poem, almost to make it in a smart aleic ( sp ) tone, sometimes....othertimes they are just thoughts. Thanks for replying Riley Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ha ha ha ha! |
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