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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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"footsteps are cliche'" she said. She took the cork within her mouth. She pulled it till she heard the pop-- then she spat it out. "footsteps are cliche'" she said... "someone? light my cigarette?" She clenched a butt bent in her teeth. Taunting in bad bitchery... "FOOTSTEPS" she insisted sweat. Then she guzzled sangria-- footstep stomp of language-- upon a parchment's bottled prey to wash up on a sand filled prayer: "footsteps, yes, they are cliche..." "And legs? are dreams of gravity..." Footprints-- imprints in the sand... A hollow of myself she sang footsteps follow me in stand... [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (11-07-2002 06:51 AM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Another one that makes my brain hurt. Boy Serenity, I think I'm so smart and then I have to read your poetry...  Although one thing I DO know I can critique is the idea of footsteps. Kinda cliche. Maybe it's just me?  |
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