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Broke (a poem for Sanctuary's revolution)
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Broke (a poem for Sanctuary's revolution) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Words are broke. They whinge. Brown coins lifted from corpses' suitclothes. Investigate the sun at morning; a poem's distance, atremble. Thoughts are broke. Pour the cups. Drink your desert, hourglass. A twitch of sip. Rim salt and sand in silence, serve me bitters. Songs are broke. Can't mask their hurt. Tunings, dead and lively still. Find me books. I want to read her calm. I want to spread her sadness. Patterns broke by setter's strike. The center point is pulling type. Shatter stones, and spread the creek. Stream river's flow keeps following. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
whinge---great word Mikey... and I love the "broke" instead of "broken"-- I love the way I can take all of your poetry for any need I have. Like one of those scarf things, that can be a skirt, a blouse, hat or purse or YES..even a scarf! A shawl to keep one warm or a red cape to incite the raging bull...see what y'do to me?  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Hm, see what you do to me?Me, an article of Sen's clothing?   (puts tongue back in face and leaves fr lunch) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and? somebody's gonna have to explain this revolution to me...and please? If I miss a meeting? somebody send a memo!  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sometimes things are broke... no currency left in them to pay homage to the pain or lonely. Different from being broken... adds an interesting twist to the idea. as usual your word play is great... creating images not quite describable without twisting a thought and view from where it was to someplace you feel it... Nah.... you aren't an article of clothing for me. ( yeah I KNOW that doesn't dissapoint you ( laughing)) To me you are the reference book I pull down and consult when I need to put another take on something...only problem is sometimes it reads like Alice...and it scares me I understand  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yes...you got it...it's the spirit we need to spread around. Next meeting? Right here! Under the blue sky, under the oak tree... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, Ron. Sharon, should I hang the lanterns? |
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