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Dee
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0 posted 2002-08-26 01:49 AM


Six Inch Heels

Shiny and black
with six inch heels.
I love those shoes
cause they made me tall.
Tall enough
to reach heaven,
or look in your eyes
as we kissed,
which is about the same.
They're lying
on the edge of the carpet
where I took them off
when you left.
(This is for you, ya big mug love me xo)

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

© Copyright 2002 Dee Manders - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-08-26 01:09 PM


That's one lucky cup of coffee. Sorry, the big mug got me, especially since I am currently coffee-less.

Let's remedy that.

Mike

Christopher
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2 posted 2002-08-26 07:17 PM


awww, shucks! thanks!

actually... this was cool. i must admit that my masochistic side read the ending as a departure of emotion as well as physical presence. *grin* adding the "big mug" portion at the end, however, quickly showed me the error of my ways.

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2002-08-26 07:50 PM


Can you really walk on those things???

I've known some 6 foot heels..but I don't date those anymore!

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2002-08-28 08:56 AM


*smiling at you Dee-girlie*
love this poem and this side of your pen.

  

Dee
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5 posted 2002-08-30 04:40 AM


Mike, you will definitely have to remedy the coffee-less situation.

Christopher, I think the heels showed him the error of my ways.

Sharon, I have trouble walking in them too but when he is about 9 inches taller than me I have to do something. And yeah I've known a few six foot heels too.


Thanks all.
Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

Dee
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6 posted 2002-08-30 04:41 AM


Janet, glad to give you a smile, any time. I kinda like it when my pen gets a bit cheeky too.
I think the big mug enjoyed it.

love to you,
Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

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