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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
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0 posted 2002-08-12 12:43 PM


Wedding Vows
I’ve Learned the lessons of my youth,
And those within my prime.
I’ve walked through years of loneliness,
My trusting heart, my crime.

My soul grew weary with the search,
As years passed quickly by.
I never thought I’d find the one,
Who’d love me ( need line)

Yet here I stand beside my love,
Our vows about to say.
I thank my precious Savior, Lord,
For sending you my way.

I promise that I’ll love your soul,
Through easy, happy times.
And when the road get rougher yet,
I’ll gladly call you mine.

I promise here to speak my mind,
When something isn’t right.
I promise now to listen well,
And try with all my might.

I vow to you, to give you space,
And help you respect mine.
I vow to share the heavy work,
To give us both some time.

And at the end of everyday,
We will not sleep still cross.
For anger eats away at love,
And I can’t bear that loss.

Today in front of all our friends,
Our God and Family.
I give my heart to you, my love,
For all eternity.



© Copyright 2002 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-08-12 10:11 PM


Marilyn~
Firstly ... it's lovely and best wishes are sent to the couple~

'Wedding Vows

I’ve Learned the lessons of my youth,
And those within my prime.
I’ve walked through years of loneliness,
My trusting heart, my crime.

My soul grew weary with the search,
As years passed quickly by.
I never thought I’d find the one,
Who’d love me beyond all time

Yet here I stand beside my love,
Our vows about to say.
I thank my precious Savior, Lord,
For sending you my way.

I promise that I’ll love your soul,
Through easy, happy times.
And when the road get rougher yet,
I’ll gladly call you mine.

I promise here to speak my mind,
When something isn’t right.
I promise now to listen well,
And try with all my might.

I vow to you, to give you space,
And help you respect mine.
I vow to share the heavy work,
To give us both some time.

And at the end of everyday,
We will not sleep still cross.
For anger eats away at love,
And I can’t bear that loss.

Today in front of all our friends,
Our God and Family.
I give my heart to you, my love,
For all eternity.'

Maybe ?
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2002-08-14 11:22 AM


Thanks for the help Marg. I have drawn a blank with that line. I was getting a bit panicked because it wasn't coming together and the wedding is only a few days away. I am the MC and I have so much I have to get ready.

Love you bunches. *hug*

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-08-14 10:22 PM


Marilyn~
My pleasure to assist~
Have a wonderful Saturday ...
You'll make a great MC-ette~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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