In Harboured Dreams - challenge

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In Harboured Dreams - challenge

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-08-09 08:56 PM

In harboured dreams the weathered wrecks
Of past deceits and innuendoes
Float aimlessly amid sad debris
Of love and hate in juxtapose

Mooring held with tenuous threads
Snipped from a bloodless heart cast in stone
Suffered pain from arrow’s piercing point
Tears hidden in stifle of moan

Ragged yearnings of the lonely
On the shore of hope’s aspiration
Desperately seeking just one heart
In search of lovers salvation

**Thanks to the Princely Toad for this inspiration - I'm not sure it's any good - so feel free to rip it up!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-08-09 10:20 PM

You've made his phrase yr own with this, Sharon. Want some more phrases for your thirsty drowning?

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-08-09 10:29 PM

Yes please...I'm hiding here in 'no muse'ment land...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-08-13 04:03 PM

Sharon --

"I drink the rain from cups of rock."

Toad
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since 2002-06-16

Posts 161

4 posted 2002-08-13 06:07 PM

You did a good job with the weak line I supplied far better than I could have managed.

Thanks for the chance to read and reply.

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