To Tivona Leigh Karsela (an acrostic) repost

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To Tivona Leigh Karsela (an acrostic) repost

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-07-29 06:54 PM

This is a repost from somewhere in Dark 3. My attempt at keeping Sanctuary alive!

To Tivona Leigh Karsela
The star of sun in falling grace.
Occluded night among its face.

The sun is slowly drooping west.
I walk along its road again.
Violet ray finality.
Off the hills, the shadows sting.
Nothing here seems settled, right.
Almond trees below treeline.

Lemon trees are dropping fruit.
Evergreens are staying mute.
I walk along the hollow road.
Gift of song from space below.
Holding onto what I know.

Kill dawning cracks of heart and time.
A break ahead to walk the field.
Remembering her sweetest rhymes.
Sun will rise before I yield.
Evergreens are staying mute.
Lemon trees are dropping fruit.
A light. She guides me by her moon.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-07-30 06:10 PM

Wow, this forum is soooo dead.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

2 posted 2002-07-31 11:06 PM

yeah, cos everbody off too watch the
balladeer toerag larryc longjohn
faht
theys damn funny
Sorry to puke on your wonderful love letter
squirrel
but your reply touched a nerve

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-08-01 04:05 PM

Post here as often as you like, brian. I know I appreciate it. And I appreciate yr words.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-08-01 09:54 PM

Kill dawning cracks of heart and time.
A break ahead to walk the field.
Remembering her sweetest rhymes.
Sun will rise before I yield.
Evergreens are staying mute.
Lemon trees are dropping fruit.
A light. She guides me by her moon.
==========================

your poetry is a cornucopia of Eden's offerings..
makes me wanna kick off me butterfly slippers and run barefoot.

Tell me we belong together
Dress it up with the trappings of love
Ill be captivated, Ill hang from your lips
Instead of the heartache from above

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-08-01 11:52 PM

How cool of you to say so, Butterfly Slippers!

Said if I only could ...
-KB

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