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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-06-21 09:28 PM



Like the lines in my face I see
Telephone wires against the sky
This trip was meant to save us
Our marriage about to die

Each mile brings another town
Unknown faces are all we see
But then I turn and look at you
You’re also a stranger to me



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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-06-21 09:44 PM


You're potent t'night.... I love it.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Goodknight
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2 posted 2002-06-21 09:46 PM


very good poetry - I liked it a lot - Paul
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-06-21 09:48 PM


Excellent....but you don't have lines in your face!
Good stuff!

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2002-06-21 09:49 PM


I really don't but I COULD...I'm certainly old enough.
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5 posted 2002-06-22 12:21 PM




WOW!!! This sounded to me like some poem Bob Dylan or Chris Isaak can make a song out of, sweet friend, meeting friends along the way can indeed feel like that but some strangers will know us better than others! (sigh) This is another keeper, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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