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Telephone Wires Against the Sky |
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Like the lines in my face I see Telephone wires against the sky This trip was meant to save us Our marriage about to die Each mile brings another town Unknown faces are all we see But then I turn and look at you You’re also a stranger to me |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You're potent t'night.... I love it. She said burn ... together. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
very good poetry - I liked it a lot - Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent....but you don't have lines in your face! Good stuff! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I really don't but I COULD...I'm certainly old enough. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
WOW!!! This sounded to me like some poem Bob Dylan or Chris Isaak can make a song out of, sweet friend, meeting friends along the way can indeed feel like that but some strangers will know us better than others! (sigh) This is another keeper, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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