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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-06-21 07:51 PM





It’s only a glass of water on the table
Nothing unusual about that at all
Except the print of her reddened lips
Send me reeling against the wall

Cries of your passion greet me
As I climb to our bedroom above
My heart beats in rhythm with
The sound of your illicit love

I hear you call her name
She coos softly back at you
My hand on the doorknob
Wondering what to do

I turn and walk away
All my instincts are to leave
To hide my head in darkness
To begin my night of grieve.

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-06-21 07:53 PM


Wow...this just aches Sharon....good write!

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-06-21 07:54 PM


I love yr darkness! Powerful stuff, PdV.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-06-21 08:01 PM


darn I loved this one..I should try a  dark and sad one..but I am trying to stay upbeat tonight..but boy this was a great visual

*s
M

Duncan
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4 posted 2002-06-21 09:50 PM


Love it when she turns around.
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-06-22 12:24 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Sharon, this is soooooo hauntingly sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope everything is alright, this is heavy! (sigh) Very well expressed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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