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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-06-21 09:09 PM



The day passed quickly
As Kia lead me across the plain
After the fire of evening dies
By the stream we sleep again

Blinded by an arrow’s aim
I struggle to follow in her lead
To rest at home among my sisters
To revenge this fateful deed

His face will always be burned
In my memory of that night
Surprised by my quickness
He turned to stand and fight

My creed dictates his death
After mating in lover’s heat
But too quickly did he turn
So we hastened in our retreat

Immortal though we may be
And choose to stand and fight
But harder to be so brave
When darkness takes my sight


** I think I'm going to make this better...make it into one of my Immortal Clan series..

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1 posted 2002-06-21 09:16 PM


Oh this is beautiful and should be shared in Open!
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2 posted 2002-06-21 09:36 PM


Definitely something for the Immortal Women series!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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3 posted 2002-06-22 12:19 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this sounds like a prologue to a wonderfully promising and classic series, sweet friend, I too think this has to be posted in Open too so many others can gaze upon this wonder! (smiles) This is a powerful tale in the making, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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