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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The sea is darkest before day Beckoning the dawn from her lair With gilded light she awakens Shakes the mist from her hair She beckons weary sailors With her soothing rolling caress They follow unknowing She leads them to distress Her siren song lures them on Unsuspecting to a watery grave As quickly she whips up her waves Til no one is left to save **I'm getting tired..going to slow down a bit..this one isn't very good. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I like it...reads well out loud too. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
yes - it is good for going so fast - out loud works well with it - Paul |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I loved it! Don't try ratin' yourself, it's always a downhill battle (as Lore shows about me) ... She said burn ... together. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! I for one like this, sweet friend, you have been on fire today posting, this reminded me of in The Odysseyt by Homer when Odysseus covers his ears and ties himself to the mast to avoid being captured by the sirens on the island! (sigh) Your words are always captivating, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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