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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-06-21 08:23 PM



Several keys by the door
Old memories of homes
No longer mine
Each one opened a time
When my life was
With you
Each key
A memory
Of you
And me

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-06-21 08:24 PM


sweet  *s

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2 posted 2002-06-21 08:31 PM


Ooo, I like! Reminds me in tone of Elizabeth Bishop's "One Art." Kinda.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-06-21 08:40 PM


This is very good!  
Very interesting thoughts.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-06-22 12:14 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I a so lucky I was able to find the door to this hidden poetry place, this is wonderfully delightful! (smiles) May you look around each corador and find a smile to cherish forever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You haver such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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