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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-02-01 03:44 PM



No smoking
No eating
No drinking

No dreaming
No yearning
No thinking

No cussing
No swearing
No fighting

No knowledge
No reading
No writing

No pets
No kids
No fun

No simile
No metaphor
No pun

No running
No kicking
No cheating

No kidding
No tricking
No treating

No shoes
No shirt
No service

No rules
So makes
Me nervous


© Copyright 2001 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2001-02-01 03:48 PM


and NO whinging!!!  

love ya Walty  

Martie
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2 posted 2001-02-01 04:26 PM


Hey Walt...didn't anyone ever tell you, some rules are for breaking.  Welcome to Haven.
Martie
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3 posted 2001-02-01 04:27 PM


OOPs!!

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 02-01-2001).]

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2001-02-01 04:32 PM


Ooooooooooo
AAAAAAaaaaaaaa
Walt.......YEssssssss
no?
YES!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

suthern
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5 posted 2001-02-01 05:18 PM


Is that you shaking? *G* I thought they'd provided foot massages here... (sigh) Ah, well... it's still a delight! *G* (So's your poem)
CocoBaci
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6 posted 2001-02-01 05:35 PM


This is so cute Walt...

coco

CocoBaci
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7 posted 2001-02-01 05:35 PM


arrite I see I'm having a spitz with posting a reply...sorri for this double wammy you guysNgurls...


[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 02-01-2001).]

Nan
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8 posted 2001-02-01 06:11 PM


Walt - I'd bump you up, but there's not far to go here...:*
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
9 posted 2001-02-01 06:31 PM


No kidding!
wayoutwalt
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10 posted 2001-02-01 06:48 PM


I am going to reply to this while it is on top so I don't get confused
Elizabeth
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11 posted 2001-02-01 11:13 PM


Poetic license....poets can do what they want!
serenity blaze
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12 posted 2001-02-02 03:01 PM


No problem.
Kethry
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13 posted 2001-02-03 07:58 AM


No Worries walt, you sound like U2 and I guess in that case you'd be numb instaed of number one.
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Irish Rose
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14 posted 2001-02-12 04:17 PM


No way can I stay away from reading this great stuff    

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



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