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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
(This is a repost.) The bleakest day, with clouds of gray, In me I feel a chill. The winter sky it seems to cry No sun doth shine, nor will. Hate's seed is sown, I am alone I scream and reach for you You are not there, for they don't care There anger is so true. I want to fight, though it's not right, I only try to hide No feelings showw-they must not know I'll keep it all inside. 10-99 Just see how virtue repays you, you turn and someone betrays you Betray him first, and the game's reversed... -from The Scarlet Pimpernel |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sadly beautiful. You shouldn't hide you know...eventually someone finds you... |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A poet can never hide their feelings, especally a poet that writes as beautifully as you! Thanks for sharing!  "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Elizabeth--I have felt this way before...it is lonely...you have expressed it well. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
awww, does this mean I've been discovered already?  Thanks all....but I've learned that sometimes it's for the best to try to mask the feelings...especially when you aren't supposed to have them in the first place. Just see how virtue repays you, you turn and someone betrays you Betray him first, and the game's reversed... -from The Scarlet Pimpernel |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Elizabeth, isn't it frustrating...we cannot even hide in this, our sanctuary...anguished words they might be, still you write beautiful poetry... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well written, Elizabeth! Yep, I agree, sometimes we just have to hide some of our feelings. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wowness......very well written! I really enjoyed this read.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Elizabeth, your poem today seemed to just reach out and grab hold of me... I thank you for this read... ~coco~ You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Thanks to everyone who read this... Just see how virtue repays you, you turn and someone betrays you Betray him first, and the game's reversed... -from The Scarlet Pimpernel |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Elizabeth, thankyou for letting us read it  Suburbia is where the developer bulldozes out the trees, then names the streets after them. - Bill Vaughan |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
simply magnificent.....thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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