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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-02-07 10:56 PM

Outside your window
a present from me to you.
Bathe in light tonight.

*my most appropriate respost  *

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-02-08 11:03 AM

heheheh it took a cupple reads but yuh i got it hehehehhehe
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2 posted 2001-02-08 04:54 PM

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3 posted 2001-02-08 05:03 PM

Full moon?  Loved it!
Poet deVine
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4 posted 2001-02-08 06:24 PM

Rats! I thought I already had this gift. Then I read the poem......lovely poem.  
Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2001-02-08 07:11 PM

Nicely done!!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-02-10 04:20 AM

Uh-Oh ... I thought it was for Doreen !
I'm glad I opened it !

Know what ???
This is just soooooo appropriate ! LOL !
Tee-Hee !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~

Yu Lan
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7 posted 2001-04-28 09:10 PM

ah yep.. ^^ Yep.. yep.. I'm just going to keep saying yep, 'coz I'm not sure what to reply.. Enjoyed reading this.. ^^ Well done. (Yep)


"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu

Dark Angel
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8 posted 2001-05-23 02:48 AM

What a beautiful present!  


Allan Riverwood
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9 posted 2001-12-20 02:03 AM

Hey, am I missing something?  Who's the gift to?  Must be something from back when it was actually posted...

Well, this senryu (I say senryu because the most basic theme of the poem is human relation, despite the nature image) is very sweet... I like the use of an imperative sentence as the last line.

Nice work...


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