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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Outside your window a present from me to you. Bathe in light tonight. *my most appropriate respost  * |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
heheheh it took a cupple reads but yuh i got it hehehehhehe |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Full moon? Loved it! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Rats! I thought I already had this gift. Then I read the poem......lovely poem. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity Uh-Oh ... I thought it was for Doreen ! I'm glad I opened it ! Know what ??? This is just soooooo appropriate ! LOL ! Tee-Hee ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
ah yep.. ^^ Yep.. yep.. I'm just going to keep saying yep, 'coz I'm not sure what to reply.. Enjoyed reading this.. ^^ Well done. (Yep) -Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
What a beautiful present! Maree |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey, am I missing something? Who's the gift to? Must be something from back when it was actually posted...  Well, this senryu (I say senryu because the most basic theme of the poem is human relation, despite the nature image) is very sweet... I like the use of an imperative sentence as the last line. Nice work... ~Allan |
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