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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2001-12-18 11:07 PM



Luminescent and sublime
love glows in her eyes
fragrant and forgiving
seeking lover’s sighs.

Radiant is her love for him
shining for all to see
She breathes her life just for him
without guile or duplicity.

The touch of her hand has healed
his once scarred, wretched heart
The warmth of her love gives him
a haven - a place to start.

For you, yes, YOU. You know who you are.

© Copyright 2001 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
1 posted 2001-12-18 11:47 PM


Aw, ain't that sweet, you wrote a poem for me...
Enjoyed reading, PdV, the first verse especially..
Luv
Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-12-19 10:06 AM


ah....mysteries...hmmmm...

Well I know this ain't about ME...grin, I'm hardly a "safe haven"!!!!

It's a lovely poem--luminescant and sublime...I love that!

NOW WHO???? grin..


Shou-Lao
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 48

3 posted 2001-12-19 07:03 PM



Whoever it is he’s a lucky man.

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2001-12-20 09:00 AM


Thank you for reading this. "Lucky?" LOL I think he'd be a fool to feel lucky to have me!!
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