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...sanctuary |
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I want a sanctuary a place from far off thunder; may perseverance tarry, revealing childlike wonder. And solace in my mind, revealing promises once made. Oh, give me now, the signs of healing from the prayers I’ve prayed. Please, ray of heaven touch me! let evening mist descend. Rain warming beads of certainty as love and hope transcend. Shine luminescent vision- a chance, another start. I struggle with submission. I know this in my heart. I’m simply going home again; to find myself at last. From decades holding silent strain of burdens, never cast. My sanctuary, I believe is threefold-gentle wind. My body, mind and spirit grieve, to peace, I will ascend. "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis [This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 02-05-2001).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh my, Kathleen...this poem really moved me... I’m simply going home again; to find myself at last. From decades holding silent strain of burdens, never cast. My sanctuary, I believe is threefold-gentle wind. My body, mind and spirit grieve, to peace, I will ascend. --- Wonderfully done! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And Lo...a sanctuary was created.... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Beautiful poem, and what a place to post it in! nicely done! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
LOL@Sunshine. Yes, indeed this is an awesome poem. I really enjoyed it immensely. Namely the last stanza. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked this... great poem... keep writing ...? death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Thank you all for your kind replies. Kathleen Blake |
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