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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Slice me a peace of REALITY, Oh no,that’s wrong, let me try again, Slice me a piece of really, Dang it!Sometime expressions a Pain Poetically speaking that is; Sometime the words wiz Rhyme and meter falling just so That almost effortlessly will flow Letting the emotions out for the telling Only to be snagged by a silly mispelling back to the poem Slice me a piece of reality, Rough cut not so pretty, No need to wrap itRrinnng oh, now the phone Slice me a piece of reality, Knock, knock, knock I need a sanctuary A place of peace and quiet Gloom |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sounds like you NEED this sanctuary! I enjoyed this..in fact it made me SMILE!  |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
hehehe.....Nice one, Gloom, and a treat to read aloud (I'm odd that way).  |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Poet deVine, Glad you enjoyed it, but weren’t you the one that was going to make me smile, oh well, as long as someone smiled and I’m sure it looks better on you than me. Thank you, Alicat, Pleased you were treated, I seldom think of reading poetry out loud, always have thought of a book of poetry something to curl up with before falling asleep. Just recently, I’ve been going to a Poetry Open Mic where I’ve read some of my work. The most noticeable thing I’ve found is my lack of talent for reading to a crowd. Gloom |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Gloom Nice to see that there is humor in gloom. Enjoyed this! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
So I write gloom and you write humor? hmmm...people are gonna think we've been osmoting (izzat a woid?) yer right, expression is difficult!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I forget to come here, I get so wrapped up in open....or in prose....or in discussion....that I forget to come here, where reality can be found, sliced, or left whole... where give and take is found in comfortable hands.... I forget to come here... I need to bookmark here |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Martie, But Shirley you must be mistaken, There no Humor in Gloom Just like there is no joy in Mudville. Thank you, Serenity, If you wrote it, it has to be a word, If it’s properly spelled or if Daniel put it in his book Well, that’s another question. But he’s been dead so long you can’t expect him to keep up, why I was just talking to his ghost the other day… Thank you, Sunshine, Don’t blame me, deVine got me to come here, Said it was a slower pace and really built it down, So naturally I had to come and see for myself. But if you’re in the Open I guess it’s better to be wrapped up Than to be unwrapped. Gloom |
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