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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-01-13 06:06 PM

Sleepless

Flowered paper
two dimensional
appears to move
three dimensional
as lace shadows
from night beams
of moon’s light
stream in

Fullest of moon
lights my dreams
so
feel the pull
that is
scattering sleep
along the prairie
and walk with
me
in the wind

Come help me
gather my thoughts
as they run
as rampant
as children
on a spring day

Then just lay
quiet with me
here on the plains
here in my spirit
let me feel
you telling me
it will be
all right
in all ways
always

Then

Then let
the sound
of me

Touch the moon

KRJ
03.11.01
revised
01.13.02

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

1 posted 2002-01-13 06:09 PM

Beautiful!
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

2 posted 2002-01-13 06:10 PM

The terseness and shortness of your lines enhances the message and the mood you create. I like this piece very much. Thank for sharing it.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-13 06:15 PM

ah, those plains sound SO inviting and that last line,.........fabulous.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2002-01-13 06:53 PM

Sunshine - this is awesome and going in my library. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

5 posted 2002-01-13 08:13 PM

I'm so glad I was sleepless so I could read this beautiful poem of yours

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-01-13 08:26 PM

Then

Then let
the sound
of me

Touch the moon
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Ooooh this ending Karilea!!!!
Goosebumps!! Wow are you on a roll today girl! Love it!
Hugs, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

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