Open Poetry #18 |
Somebody Elses Angel (song) |
Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hey yall wow two posts from me this week. hehehe. thats odd. i wrote this song while i was in va. but didnt want to post it till i got back to ny tell me what yall think. Somebody Elses Angel By: Jesse C. Jaymz Intro: E E A Its been so long since i've seen you E B Your leaving me took me by surprize E A I remember all the love that we once had E B E But your wedding band makes me wanna cry A Cuz now your somebody elses angel E Somebody elses love B Somebody elses dream come true E From the heavens up above A B I wish that i could turn back time E A And start all over again E B E Cuz then you'd be my angel again E A I think back to all those wonderful days E B All the stary moonlit winter nights E A Now i sit alone, in this crowded smoke filled bar E B E while he sits at home holding you tight A Cuz now your somebody elses angel E Somebody elses love B Somebody elses dream come true E From the heavens up above A B I wish that i could turn back time E A And start all over again E B E Cuz then you'd be my angel again (lead Guitar break) E A Now its time to rest, my old aching bones E B Try to dream away some of my misery E A I lay down my head, and close my tired eyes E B E But when i do your face is all i see A But now your somebody elses angel E Somebody elses love B Somebody elses dream come true E From the heavens up above A B I wish that i could turn back time E A And start all over again E B E Cuz then you'd be my angel again... Its just another heartache |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh jessie..i love this alot...maybe alan jackson will sing this one..next time i see him ill ask him Good Luck ~Vic [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-13-2002 03:42 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Aww Jesse..I am so sorry that your angel flew away from you...but do not worry, because you will meet the love of your life soon enough. This will make a sad but nicely written song. I want to hear it on mp3 if you have it! (hugs) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Jesse, this is so sad but sooooo beautiful, I'm sorry that your love is gone but I know deep down with all my heart you will be embraced with true love very soon and you again be singing about your angel all the time! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I just know this would make a great hit, I would love to hear you perform it this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jesse, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
victoria: *hugs* i wish you really did know alan jackson. but if ya ever do run into him make sure ya pass this along. *hugs* rosepetal: you know you really make me blush at times thank you for that. i know that i will find that angel too. no i dont have this one on mp3 sadly. when i wrote it i didnt have access to any stuff like that to make it into one. was just me, my guitar, and a front porch in virginia. noah: thank you so much for your reply. your another one that made me blush. thank you very much. mabye one day it will be on the radio and everyone can hear me preform So tonight I'll ask |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very sweet, Outlaw....if you're ever in MN bring the band along and do a gig here. I'd like to hear this. *hugs* God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
lovely....would be nice to hear the music and words together |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Very good song. Of course your Angel is just around the corner looking for you. [This message has been edited by inot2B (01-14-2002 06:40 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Good one, Jesse. Thanks! -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very sad yet, lovely write......you think you could give me a few pointers about songwriting? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jesse~ Hello, love ... so good to see and 'hear' you again~ Got some great possiblity with this one, babe~ Hope it lands in the right hands~ Hope you are doing fine and dandy~ Thanks for stopping in to woo us with your song~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Elizabeth: thank you hun. i will make sure when we play to play in mn *hugs* hoot_owl_rn: thank you. i wish i knew a way to somehow do that here at passions. for now i will just have to sing REALLLLY loud. inot2B: if you see that angel around the corner tell her to come this way. hehehe thanks for the reply Nate Dogg: sure i would love to. drop me an e-mail sometime. thanks marge: i hope it lands in the right hands too. mabey one day i will make it to nashville. least i can always dream. So tonight I'll ask |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've "sung" a similar tune this past year... just never so beautifully. *S* I'd love to hear this, Jesse... the words are lovely. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jesse, Good lyrics enjoyed the read. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Jesse I could just hear the music while reading this, very nice indeed, floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Jesse, so glad I found this. What a perfect song for the lovelorn. I'd like to hear you sing this. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Cuz now your somebody elses angel Somebody elses love Somebody elses dream come true From the heavens up above love this part especially..flows wonderfully *s Maureen |
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