Open Poetry #18 |
A Magic Touch |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A Magic Touch A magic touch I send your way and place upon your lips To tell you of my love, today while taking gentle sips I saw you in my dreams last night and knew that this I'd do So as I watch the sun's first light my message's sent to you The warmth of you envelopes me against your beating heart Over distance I know you see the thoughts that I impart A magic touch I send to you along with tender kiss To tell you that my love is true and that it's you I miss Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Karen - magic touch and kiss received. M'mmm, excellent writing... BC |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Karen; This is soooo lovely and filled with love straight from the heart! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Karen, I love your magic touch, You ought to publish a book of romantic poetry. floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely sweet Karen...always a nice flow of words from your pen.. ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen....you do this so well....Yes...I know that somewhere that magic touch has been received...Such wonderful flowing words of love from a true poetess....and a weaver of words beyond compare.. |
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HumbleBee Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 52Kentucky |
A lovely and romantic poem. The best gift one can give is a poem from the heart, I know your poem gave your friend many smiles. So many great poems here in this forum, I want so much to read all of them...sigh |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Karen - Very good, romantic write. The magic touch of love can definitely travel across great distances. Dave |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You've got that magic touch...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
It is always such a joy to read your poems. They are always so full of romance. |
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