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Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-01-11 07:03 PM

It is the death of one dream,
the birth of another.
Pain is the bridge
spanning hope's horizon.
Tears water the empty soil
keeping moisture silent,
waiting for the new seed
to be planted, to grow.
One heart is torn asunder,
the other built anew.
To reach the other shore,
my heart walks on water.

Love is waiting on wings
that flutter heartbeats
into existence,
~~~waft upon dreams.

I await the birth of the new,

~~~~~~my resurrection.

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2002-01-11 07:31 PM

Nicely done here, Ivy Rose. I liked the idea of love bringing resurrection.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2002-01-11 08:07 PM

Ivy, I am also awaiting that and this poem almost had me in
my angel outfit. Thank you for this. In fact, I think I will
wear a size 8 how does that sound?

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

3 posted 2002-01-11 11:25 PM

Elizabeth...Thanks so much. I'm so happy that this poem made you think of love and resurrection. I appreciate your comments.

Irish Rose...Maybe we will both be able to fit into a size 8 angel gown. Yet in reality, I was writing about the loss of a special kind of love with a soul mate. I know if a seed of corn does not go into the ground and die...new life will never emerge. But it is painful this kind of loss. Thanks for your kind words and, most of all, your humor.

Thank you both,

***Ivy Rose

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-12 04:38 PM

(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Ivy, this is soooooo beautiful, love will always blossom and resurrect all our hopes and dreams and help us to enjoy and embrace life with a warm loving smile! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, your words are always soooooo beautiful! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2002-01-12 04:44 PM

Your gift for turning love into something that makes me sigh with the vision and feel of it will always leave me in awe of your poems. I love this...Magnificent. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-01-12 08:23 PM

Ivy...I am not a man of a million words...
But a thousand or so could say all that
you have written within this powerful little
piece...Very well written...very well...

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

7 posted 2002-01-12 08:51 PM

'It is the death of one dream,
the birth of another.
Pain is the bridge
spanning hope's horizon.'

'Love is waiting on wings
that flutter heartbeats
into existence,
~~~waft upon dreams.'

Excellently expressed concepts, Ivy Rose...you definitely gave me something to think about...great write!

sp

I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe
Until you're resting here with me...

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