Open Poetry #18 |
Precious Gems |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Precious Gems By Larry Chadwick I was reviewing the highlights of my life, And found you there for most of them. The sweetest moments of discovery, Have been like collecting precious gems. Then I was reviewing the rest of my life, And there you were again. The bitter moments purify like fire, Refining those collected precious gems. That’s the wonderful thing about my life, That you are at its core. Now I cherish all those precious gems, What else is aging for? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Larry Such a marvellous dedication to that special someone in your life....truly beautiful words. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Larry, great read. 's funny I always thought aging was so that the wrinkles would have a place to live. Oh well Cest la vie. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy this is UTTERLY UTTERLY fanbulous Why is it that your writing is sooooo expressive? Well, whatever it is absolutely fabulous darling boy. Yet again I find this consigned to oblivion in the outter reaches of space. Or in this case so far back that no one would find it without a hunt. I can't let these beauties disappear before they've been seen by the other seekers of beauty so I return it to the top of the first page. Never fear Larry darling boy my mission is to seek out the fallen gems And I will always find the good stuff Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 [This message has been edited by Marsha (01-11-2002 10:49 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I was reviewing the highlights of my life, And found you there for most of them"" what a wondeful touching poem....it makes life worth it, when you have that precious gem to share it with.... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, That special someone is my wife. It has been a slightly bumpy but delightful ride, getting smoother every day! Thanks. Keth, As always, you crack me up. Love to see your name in my list of responses as I am assured of a smile, if not an outright guffaw! Bless you and thanks. Mushy, Where would I be without you? You sure put a lot of effort into your posts. Both in finding poems to respond to and the post itself. Your dedication is admirabley devout for all to see. Let's see...eight days? |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Larry, thanks for wearing your heart on your sleeve in this way. It's a poignant and uplifting read and I appreciated it. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, Good morning. Thank you. Hope you saw my free verse...you're me hero! [This message has been edited by Larry C (01-13-2002 12:54 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Canuckster, Wow, thanks. I hope you have found a permanent home here at Passions, eh? Sorry I'm not really from Canada, just grew up near the border. LOL |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* it is sooooooooo good to read the words of a man who knows the wonderful treasure he has in his wife...I love this poem...it speaks from your heart. Love is not meant to always be clear sailing but as time goes on two indeed become one of heart, mind and soul like you and your wife are. BRAVO!!! **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C, True is true, you know what gems have to go through to form. Enjoyed |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This is lovely Larry..i knew it was good for something ha ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are always gems to these pages! (big hugggssssss) May love always be the crown jewel of your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Its so nice to see a poem written by a sensitive man, Larry. Your wife is a very lucky woman. Great job! copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Larry You are definitely one of a kind and that "special someone" is very lucky. Nicely done. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Larry - you write it as it is, to her from your heart. Nice, nice, nice... BC |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Larry, this is a wonderful dedication to your wife. Having that someone special to share your life with does make life worthwhile. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, You saw right through me. LOL Yup, I meant the rough times we have shared as well. Thanks for the little things you see. Sy, That makes us tempered, eh? Thanks Sy. Victoria, Too funny. Thanks for your humor. I enjoy it so much. Noah, From one gem to another gem...thanks. Lyra, You are always so kind. I suppose I have to make a private request to get lessons on images, eh? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
This way everybody gets a smilie! Ariana, Spoken as one who know "one of a kind" I'm sure. SmartChick, Indeed it does! Bill, I have no idea how you got left out. But a late thanks to you. I always appreciate your remarks. [This message has been edited by Larry C (01-13-2002 12:56 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy sending this back to the top of the page. I don't believe it's finished inspiring and bringing delight and wisdom to others. I told you I won't let beauty fall too quickly It is a fabulous piece darling boy and yes it's 7 days Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, Thanks a bunch! But I was wondering...is it a day ahead where you are 'cause I'd hate to be late. |
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