Unveiling (A duet by Mistletoe Angel and rosepetals25)

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rosepetals25

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0 posted 2002-01-12 03:19 PM

Unveiling

How doth my dreams come true?
What doth love expect of me?
How must I love you?
Is my life just a silent dream

Could my wishes becoming real?
What if the cold hurt in my heart
Is restored by this warmth so surreal
Could my life finally begin to start?

Then, oh my, how my heart metamorphosized
When I first saw your creamy gold satin face
Glimpsing into your moist loving eyes
At first sight, you took my breath away

The first time I saw your silhouette there
You precious heart so open, tender soul ready
My heart danced with long lost warmth and care
My world swooned, spinning and unsteady

And we ran barefoot in the green grass happily
Free from the litany of tears
That's when I knew we were meant to be
Two sparrows in one nest with one destiny we revere

Hope and faith shine so bright in my eyes
Feeling no pain, no hurt, no fears
I can stop hiding and wear no disguise
No more heartache, not a single tear

Thank you for loving me!"
I say down on my knees thanking My Lord
I have never felt so happy
I can't ask for anything more

This love inside now awoken
So thankful for the love I have found
Our souls sharing so much unspoken
My true self exposed, this love so profound

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (01-13-2002 12:49 AM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-01-12 03:28 PM

May the duet sing to the stars, and sit on the clouds...well done, you two!

Startime
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2 posted 2002-01-12 03:39 PM

Oh WOW!!!You two have done a magnificent job here. Stunning. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

GenXer
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3 posted 2002-01-12 03:51 PM

Tara/Noah- Beautiful duet. Nice writing.

Dave

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-01-12 04:11 PM

A pleasure to read...James

RosePetal

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5 posted 2002-01-12 05:05 PM

Oooh yeah, you two know that I love this!
I love both of you so so much! well done

RP

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-01-12 05:35 PM

Tara and Noah!!
A beautiful duet from you two!
Enjoyed this soooo much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Charisma

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7 posted 2002-01-12 05:48 PM

Beautiful, and so full of love....you two are amazing. Love it!

((hugs))
Charisma

walker
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8 posted 2002-01-12 06:39 PM

Thank God for romantic poets, I just love it.

ellie LeJeune
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9 posted 2002-01-12 06:58 PM

I love this romantic duet! soooo warm and full of promise of Love that will last for always...

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

dawn to dusk
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10 posted 2002-01-12 08:52 PM

Noah and Tara, good job! This is beautiful. You two work well together! I loved it.

Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2002-01-12 11:49 PM

Tara & Noah - now this is great! Noah, you are quite the romantic, and Tara so are you. Just loved this duet...

BC

rosepetals25

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12 posted 2002-01-13 12:51 PM

Thank you everyone for coming to read

I'm glad you all liked it. Noah was so easy to work with, it wasn't a hard thing accomplish

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Kethry
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13 posted 2002-01-13 05:02 AM

Tara and Noah,
you did good, I knew you could.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

strbbux
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14 posted 2002-01-13 11:35 AM

Tara and Noah, my this was simply beautiful, great job you two. I loved it. floria

sodpossom
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15 posted 2002-01-13 11:37 AM

Very beautiful and warm duet by both of you.Nice job!

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