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To Catch A Falling Star
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To Catch A Falling Star |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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To Catch A Falling Star You cast a net made of moon dust that sparkles in the sky Border it with the gold of trust on it’s strength you’ll rely Honesty must sew it’s weaving with the finest of threads Done by a heart still believing the fantasies he treads With faith to guide a loving hand the net will soon be cast Among the brilliant stars he’ll stand waiting for her to pass He sees her spinning ‘round the sun advancing from afar This is the way it must be done to catch a falling star With inner strength he takes a chance and casts the perfect throw She’s caught in a web of romance that sets her heart aglow Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Karen, you always wow me with your romantic poetry. My favorite stanza "With inner strength he takes a chance and casts the perfect throw She’s caught in a web of romance that sets her heart aglow" Sooo perfect!!!! Well done my friend!  |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
Hello! This Poem is very good...i love it, itz sumthing i dont think i could ever write tho i'm glad u wrote it! good job! Check out my poems at Poetry #15 plz!!! ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As always...you come through with another beautiful poem from the stars...casting the perfect star for the perfect catch...Enjoyed this one Karen... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen, Beautiful...captivating write. Enjoyed so much tonight. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Oh Karen this is written soo beatuifully, just like all the rest of your work. Nicely done! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
And from his net a shower falls To streak the darkest space Shooting stars traverse the sky Shedding stardust in its race The light of love in many hue Around the stars does dance And creats a path, a milky way That will lead to true romance Skip along this brilliant course Join hands and hearts as one Embrace behind the lover's moon Love's journey has been won Karen, you know that I wish this kind of love for you dear friend for no-one is more deserving!!! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yes..done by a heart still believing. You write beautifully of the elements of true love and its rewards. So befitting you and your heart. Bravo! Sincerely, Regina |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Startime, I just love to read your poems. They are always so full of romance. This is just beautiful. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Startime - don't know how I missed this one. But here I am. It's just great, as always.... BC |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, You know, you are a very big thinker. I don't seem to get that far off the ground. I love, however, that you can take me there. What an absolutely delightful write. THANKS!  |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I like this very much. |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Karen - I must say this was really good and very creative. Really liked the metaphors you used. Well done. Dave |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Startime, you've shared with us a precious gem of a write this eve that I have read... I gotta say2u heartfelt thanx4the beauty in this poem has left me searching4the rite words2convey2u just how sweet this poem truly is... HugsNsmiles2UdearPoetFriend *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (01-11-2002 01:40 AM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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