Open Poetry #18 |
Images Of Love |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Images of love are very evident In the myriad of words I weave My feelings are all laid out As I wear my heart upon my sleeve I'm such a hopeless romantic This is a fact I can't deny As I paint a picture of lovers Underneath a moonlit sky The moon is like a beacon Casting beams across the sand As this pair of star-crossed lovers Walk together hand in hand The soothing sound of the waves Is the only thing that can be heard Warm feelings of love and yearning From these two souls are now stirred They lie and face each other Bodies entwined in a passionate embrace As around each others faces Their fingers lightly trace Lips now joined in anticipation As sweet loving has now begun Within each others arms they'll be With the rising of the sun Suetang |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
A romantic you are suetang and this is wonderful. floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! (smiles) Yes you are a hopless romantic, and you always share the heaven of love in your heavenly verse! (kiss on cheek) May you forever be star-crossed in destiny and see the rising of the sun everyday through loves eyes! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-07-2002 06:13 PM).] |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Such romanticism in the words of this poem Sue. It is always such a pleasure to read your love words. And I think being a hopeless romantic is wonderful. Your oh so good friend. Roger |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like fun...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow Sue....nice write...you have definitely hit the door of romance with this one.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderfully romantic Sue! Enjoyed so much. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sue, this is a perfect sceario. I want to place myself directly in it! Enjoyed lots. Sandra |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Suetang, Beautiful imagery and had me wishing I was him. There was a him, correct? Very soothing. I like the finger trace about the face. Roger |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your beautiful words. True Reflections, yes it was a "him" I was writing about. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I love seeing love through your eyes, you are getting so good at these mushy ones Sue ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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