Open Poetry #18 |
Past-Present-Future |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yesterday I breathed your air and it shimmered silver-gold Wrapped warm and spicy tender as your arms did sweet enfold. Yesterday I felt the moon drifting beams in magic dance Your artist hands competed for miracles resonance. Today the air is heavy and the moon is dim and dark no golden aura calls me just monochromatic stark. Today I still look for you though you're nowhere to be found heart lives mediocrity and my spirit remains bound. Tomorrow I will meet you yet again, I feel it's so till then I live without you though my heart is crying no. Tomorrow, may it rise up with a beauty yet unknown to show me endless dreaming will not leave me all alone. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Tomorrow I will meet you yet again, I feel it's so till then I live without you though my heart is crying no. Tomorrow, may it rise up with a beauty yet unknown to show me endless dreaming will not leave me all alone. When the past and present have left us to our pain, the future and our dreams can bring comfort. I hope yours come true. Beautiful write, Sandra. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
your words are uplifting for me. thank you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Sandra, this is soooooo touching, I can feel your tears now, but I know deep down in the future very soon you will find the most beautiful love and you will be embraced by its beauty and it will fill every yesterday with sweet memories! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - thanks for sharing this, it's most beautiful... BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the future holds the sum total of our dreams and yours will be a full romantic moon raising to bath you in its love and beauty...Keep your dreams alive, Sandra...give them a chance to live. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Cat - This is indeed a sad poem. I'm sure tike will heal you, but the healing hurts, doesn't it? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, to keep you till then. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
At first, I thought this was a take off on the three card Tarot spread. I see the "Sun" card in your place of future. (victory over obstacles) melancholy place that you write from Sandra. Hugs. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
lots of emotion in this one, Sandra, but you do sound happier..... Kathleen--(Kay) |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Catalinamoon, this was very emotional. a wonderful write. floria |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sandra I feel your lonliness and emotions. Very nicely done and thank you for sharing. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra...this does sound sad, but a little more hopeful. Happy hugs sweet one, Nancy. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so sad, Sandra. But, I know there is someone very apecial out there for you. And, I hope you will find him, soon. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
catalinamoon...the softness, the sesuality of a remembered love echoing throughout each verse. Very well-expressed. **Ivy Rose |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
flowing and flying. . . wonderfully done Sandra. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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