Open Poetry #18 |
My Words On Canvas |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I'll begin with a brand new canvas And paint a picture of love for you So sit back and make yourself comfortable I want you to have the very best view I'll start with the color of sapphires Which I'll use to paint the sky And across the calm clear water I'll paint some seabirds flying by The warm wind blows gently around us As we walk together along the shore Just as long as I have your love Nothing else really matters anymore The color of the sky will soon change As the golden sun sinks below the sea We'll stand together by the water As you so very passionately kiss me Two lovers now lay in the moonlight These two souls will soon join as one Immersed in love's picture forever As our portrayal of love is now done Suetang [This message has been edited by Suetang (01-09-2002 08:13 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you finger-paint with such romance and love in your words so lovingly, may the beauty of love forever shine in your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true masterpiece of love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Suetang, from one who paints, you have done a wonderful job painting your picture with this poem. floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang, A very pleasant read, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue, a very enjoyable read....just lovely! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!STUNNING!!! I love the picture you painted. It is absolutely perfect. BRAVO!!**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Seems like the perfect portrait of love. May it be always be true in your life. Sandra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I really love this! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You painted one beautiful picture of love through your poetry Sue, very lovely. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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