Psychedelic Rhythm (Serenity's Challenge)

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Open Poetry #18

Psychedelic Rhythm (Serenity's Challenge)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-07 03:40 AM

I took a risk and responded to the challenge using no other words but the words on the magnetic poetry screen. Hope you enjoy! (kisses and hugs)

Psychedelic Rhythm
By:Noah Eaton
1/7/01

Psychedelic silhouettes...perform live on a smoke canvas
Sex symbols of aesthetic harmony
Nude angels in rhythm,
they have come to model a masterpiece
Mounting absurd metaphors
Electric blue shards smear through
Painted to the smoky green latex
A wild surreal picture is fashioned
Imagine every passion
Experiment with art from color
How do you feel?

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-07-2002 03:47 AM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-01-07 04:50 AM

Whoo hoo, rainbow write here Noah you captured the image and the rhythm perfectly.
Keth.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-01-07 04:59 AM

Noah - what are you doing up like me this time of the morning?

You are definitely writing from that warm heart you have. This is just great...

BC

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-01-07 07:23 AM

Well done, Noah. I did not see the challenge, but I can tell you aced it.
Sandra

angelbear
Member

since 2001-05-22

Posts 139
North East, USA

4 posted 2002-01-07 01:26 PM

Very vivid and what a great picture painted. I love it. I also didn't see the challenge but loved the colors, rythem and entire poem.

:}

I can't control
my destiny
I trust my soul,
my only goal
is just to "be"
-Lyrics from RENT

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2002-01-07 01:46 PM

Well done - I haven't seen it either but this has got to work!

jwesley

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-07 01:53 PM

Hey Noah you did great. I love those magnetic boards. floria

Apachecat906
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 217
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2002-01-07 01:58 PM

Hmm, very interesting. I love the question at the end. I didn't see the challenge either but this poem is great, it makes me think and it's good to look at too.

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