Open Poetry #18 |
The Mirror |
Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
In the mirror of the night I look past reflections in my sight No longer are the familiar faces they have gone without any traces What is there is what was before bits and pieces of spoken lore What is there is what I see not a feeling, only a certainty I step beyond the shimmering veil into a world of forgotten tale For there I know what I will see a pathway and you, waiting for me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wish I could sleep, so that perhaps I could dream this sweet...sighs... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is so incredibly beautiful, Logan. The veil you paint shimmers with much warmth, understanding, and gentleness. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This has a beautiful feel to it. Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How fragile are those dreams that lead a poet back to one's reality... this is both charming, and beautiful, Logan. Keep sharing...you are giving us all so much pleasure! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This is lovely Logan..beautifully penned ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Logan, this poem is stunning I read it twice over and both times I get a huge smile on my face as I sigh at that last verse you write cuz truly it is a beauty and my thanx2uPoetFriend for sharing this write with all us here... Smiles2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Logan, I enjoyed this.. muchly enjoyed. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I'd really like to 'move' this mirror into my dreams, so that I can create a path for myself too. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Such a great image. Wonderful writing, I thought! I can't control |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I step beyond the shimmering veil into a world of forgotten tale For there I know what I will see a pathway and you, waiting for me ============================================ |
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