Open Poetry #18 |
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Forget Me Not |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
As time has sunk like evening's sun past parades of glory, forcasts of doom, As logic tires of what's left undone you live still within me in a safe, distanced room. Away from the circus and dreams that I spin. Far from the rapture you once cast my way. The something that smoldered and could not begin Mocks somber on purpose in all that I say. If not for the blood that spilled from sky, When no-fault damage of your soul stole in I may not have found the innocent tie That our short lived friendship allowed me to win. I can't control my destiny I trust my soul, my only goal is just to "be" -Lyrics from RENT [This message has been edited by angelbear (01-07-2002 01:15 PM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
God, how this struck a chord....it was as if it were written from my own hand. Kathleen-- |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Sadness at the loss I feel.. just from reading your words... Pepper |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Cryan, I can feel such sorrow of loss behind these words, my heart goes out to you! (big hugggssssss) I pray that soon joy will come to your heart and again fill your heart with an unforgettable forgiving smile! (sad sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Irish Rose, It feels good to have someone relate to this. It was very hard to attempt to get my feeling to come through on this one... Thank you... ![]() Peppermint..Thanks for the feedback. There is saddness in this. Thank Goodness this is not saddness I carry everywhere. ![]() MistletoeAngel, Thank you so much for such kind words. It meant very much to me to read them. ![]() I can't control |
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