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Sea of Recollect.........
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Sea of Recollect......... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 He called to her in visions he spoke to her in dreams he wasn’t letting go of her he wasn’t through it seems He made her remember the way it used to be he held her mind in passion of their time by the sea He whispered to her soul sung that familiar melody and took her back once more to that coastal memory He touched along her spirit’s lines wanted her heart to reminisce wanted her to hear the ocean’s roar revoke his melting kiss And how he succeeded to fill her with love’s reflect yet another wave ofache in her sea of recollect ~SEA~ |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
I like this, but wonder, what became of her?? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how incredibly sad this poem is. So many regrets and sorrows it makes one feel. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love it Sue! And the picture, as I have this thing about sand dunes...reminds me of a spot where I used to live... Hauntingly wonderful write...hugs Nancy. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
perhaps a life jacket??? wonderfully done SEA. . . flowing and memorable. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, SEA, the bittersweet memories are the hardest of all to fade....A very good write and read...very gentle smile |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) So very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to her and her tears and I pray with all my heart waves of hope will recollect and the lighthouse will show her His light and promise. (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful. Simple and lovely. It doesn't get much better than this. This is a library keeper!  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know what? This is so true... well done! I am so very proud of you! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, beautifully written...with just the right touch.... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh! i like this alot..beautifully done Sea.. ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - you write these well. Love the pic. Once gone, is it ever the same???? BC |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Sea, wow...Maybe the memory is better left a memory? This is an awesome write dear poet friend!  I really enjoyed reading it!Cindi |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
purdy...lil 1'...dug the view of it....and the who dun it ending...way cool |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This was bittersweet, lovely, floria |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beautiful! One of your best! Hugs, Deb |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ahh, a poem after my own heart, this is beatiful, SEA! Cor |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
He touched along her spirit’s lines wanted her heart to reminisce wanted her to hear the ocean’s roar revoke his melting kiss The flow of this is amazing, Susan. Truly enjoyed! |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
It flowed.. just like the ocean waves.. ::sigh:: lovely work..  Hugz, Pepper |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ 'A sailing we will go' ...  'He whispered to her soul sung that familiar melody and took her back once more to that coastal memory' Taken away with the imagery this brings to mind~ Thank you for knowing and sharing~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Thank you for sharing this with us, Susan, it's lovely. Kathleen-- |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sea, beautiful once again. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Can't always bring back the good without bringing out the bad......this is excellent, SEA lady  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SEA, If there is a harbor in that sea...I think I've been there. You write of love (both sides) so well. I just can't stay away. |
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