Open Poetry #18 |
A Fairy's Poem ... for Sy |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A Fairy’s Poem…for Sy See a necklace of crystal dew From a fairy's point of view Then gather the hand of your adore This I would ask, and nothing more... Come with me, a grass blade to climb Call me sweet one, then call me fine, Shimmer my wings with sparkling dust Shake away the winter’s rust Soon we shall sneak to the dragon’s lair Just to see if Randy’s there Then tickle his nose with champagned dew Who would have thought! Me, and you? So often, you have come to rest, Playing words from deep your chest Never knowing I was just there Hiding behind your compare You thought me but a beam of sun Never knowing I had become A fairied thought to float your time While you sat to pen your rhyme Ah, but that is just the way of me A bit of sun, some fairied fantasy A song complex, from deep within Where the dragon dwells with kin So, when you see a necklace of crystal dew then take it from a fairy's point of view Just gather the hand of your adore This I would ask, and nothing more... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-29-2002 08:51 AM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful poem, Sunshine. I love stories about fairies. I love the pictures, too. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, stunningly dew kissed. It makes me wish I was Sy, Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You made my head My heart to you and I love you Sy I don't save poems as a rule but I'm saving this one. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (01-05-2002 08:41 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, This is a beautiful piece and the graphics really add to it. I too am a lover of fairies. Beautifully done. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
enchanting |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart, I'm spellbound, Normally you write well, often you write outstandingly so. Today ahhhhhh you are incandescent my sweet sister. Absolutely fabulous writing. This I LOVE, truly wonderful And of course Puck is the jester of the fairies court, I feel right at home As always Puck To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I'm 'Awwwwwwwwwwwwing' all over the room~ 'So, when you see a necklace of crystal dew then take it from a fairy's point of view Just gather the hand of your adore This I would ask, and nothing more...' What a lovely, lovely piece of enchantment for our dear Seymour~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sunshine, Sys' a lucky guy! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my goodness, ask me if I love this one. Into my fairy book it goes! Another? About a sad fairy? ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo precious, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) I too am in love with faeries and mermaids, this is sooooooo pretty! Sy will love it!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh sunshine, I love fairies and this was simply beautiful. floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
These fairy poems are so inspirational.. happy and delightful. Who is the love fairy? Or the lovelorn fairy? Sandra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all so much for enjoying this one with me...it's all Sy's fault, for providing so much inspiration! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So often, you have come to rest, Playing words from deep your chest Never knowing I was just there Hiding behind your compare You thought me but a beam of sun Never knowing I had become A fairied thought to float your time While you sat to pen your rhyme ============================================ I had to wait till I could get to a different computer to see this gem...the graphics crashed my moth computer... twas worth the wait ...this is lovely and enchanting Sun...and a wonderful gift of inspire for sweet Sy. Yes I've changed ... |
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