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dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2002-01-06 04:53 AM

you were my voice of reason
i needed you
to keep me level
enough not to teeter--
not to fall...
i never planned on you...
but you came in and sat down
talked for a while
made yourself at home...
made me love you--
i wasnt supposed to love you....
i love your soul
your heart...
will it feel as right
to hold you--
my voice of reason
having fallen into my arms...
what then my love...
what then...

-dgvarner
1-6-02

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and even when we're apart, you beat around in my heart..." -lonestar

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-06 09:16 AM

Indeed, some poignant feelings in this piece. I pray this soul cherishes yours
and never harms it in any way.

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

Mac Attack
Member

since 2001-12-12

Posts 100
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2002-01-06 11:05 AM

I agree with Kathleen, sounds like you've fallen into a dangerous trap here. I hope happiness finds you both and is not damaged by too much pain.

Nicely written.

Mac

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-06 11:11 AM

What then? lovely poem. I hope it all turns into a wonderful romantic story for you. floria

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-06 01:47 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautifully said, sweet friend, I too wish you the greatest happiness and love to come to your heart, and that he will be faithful and trusting to you, for you deserve true loves happiness so much! (kiss on cheek) Always listen to your heart and you will find loves beauty always! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

5 posted 2002-01-06 03:21 PM

Even the voice of reason knows sometimes you just have to jump into the dark waters to find out if you can swim. Just keep the shore near by or take a life preserver with you.