When Melodies are Keyed - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Virgo_Rains
Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 54
Pacific Northwest, U.S.A.

0 posted 2002-01-04 11:28 AM

When Melodies are Keyed
1/4/02

When the sun begins it's song
Of mornings destined path
And notes of orange play along
I stand alone and strong

Understand desires need
As warmth seeps into your soul
My heart sways as a tender reed
As the first melodies are keyed

As the breeze whispers your name
I am complete...I am all
In your love I became
My dreams under the suns flame

Ah sweet are the floating cries!
Tickling my senses with your breath
Constant as the suns early rise
Never echoing silent goodbyes..

S.D.K.

[quote]To love for just one moment of "ours" is worth a lifetime of any other love[quote]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-01-04 11:32 AM

*sigh* what a wonderful read...it plays sweetly on the heart. I love the feel of this poem. It is beautiful. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2002-01-04 05:26 PM

reed~~keyed

lovely rhyme here.

My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2002-01-04 11:57 PM

this is quite brilliant. Enjoyed the read.

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-01-05 12:36 PM

This is exquisite! The notes of love floating alongside the warm morning sun. Stunningly beautiful imagery.

"As warmth seeps into your soul
My heart sways as a tender reed
As the first melodies are keyed"

I like this so much, I emailed it to my special soul mate. Thank you for sharing.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-05-2002 12:39 AM).]

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2002-01-05 01:03 AM

sweet and floating love song, yes and nice last read of the night

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-01-05 07:59 AM

This is a lovely write...the title drew me in...thank you!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2002-01-05 08:04 AM

Virgo_Rains,
Beautifully done! I particularly like the asymetric rhyming scheme.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Virgo_Rains
Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 54
Pacific Northwest, U.S.A.

8 posted 2002-01-06 12:22 PM

To everyone,
Thank you for your replies...inspiration fills this site as well as generous hearts

Shelly

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2002-01-07 02:03 PM

Shelly, my eyes cascaded down the page with this piece. Well done and I love the images sewn within

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2002-01-07 03:04 PM

Lovely Shelly...nicely done..Welcome to Passions..

~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2002-01-07 04:18 PM

Ah sweet are the floating cries!
Tickling my senses with your breath
Constant as the suns early rise
Never echoing silent goodbyes..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Oh Shelly...this is so beautiful. I am so pleased I didn't miss this one!
Hugs, Nancy.

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

12 posted 2002-01-07 06:40 PM

What wonderful imagery you portrayed through your words. I enjoyed this very much.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Ocelot
Junior Member

since 2002-01-07

Posts 40
Texas

13 posted 2002-01-07 06:44 PM

Bravo...I enjoyed this piece very much. Peaceful and full of heart.

+| ... Ocelot ... |+

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2002-01-07 06:45 PM

(smiles) You're soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may your heart forever conduct symphonies of true love and key melodies of Eden! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

15 posted 2002-01-07 06:54 PM

nice write

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.