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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-01-05 10:16 PM

Tread Softly

Whisper tender thoughts in my ear
that tell me how you feel
Hold me close in your arms, my dear
as feelings we reveal

Gazing deeply into your eyes
with silent words, speaking
Kiss me with all that it implies
the taste we're both seeking

Caress me with words from within
as dreams we now can weave
Let passion fires burning begin
knowing we both believe

But tread softly upon my heart
when showing me you care
Teach me love is a gentle art
precious and very rare

Karen Torbiak©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (01-05-2002 10:17 PM).]

Son Netier
Member

since 2001-12-11

Posts 116
The Garden State

1 posted 2002-01-05 10:18 PM

Lovely thoughts and lovely poem, Love is a tender and gentle art.

Bill

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-05 10:18 PM

(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, love is indeed a precious art and it will coem to you! May the love of your life come and tread softly on your heart always and fill your spirit with true loves rapture! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-01-05 10:20 PM

Karen,

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-01-05 10:29 PM

Karen, soft, tender, passion filled...
beautiful words from a truly romantic lady.
One with a large heart filled with her own
tenderness... Not hot, but warm...No oysters
tonite???

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-01-05 10:44 PM

I have to admit, I love to read you writing about love, Karen. You express it so well! Much enjoyed this.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-01-05 11:45 PM

Karen darling girl another really beautiful art from you.

Truly outstanding, you always write with such beauty it's a clear reflection of your heart
Wonderful utterly wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-01-05 11:48 PM

But tread softly upon my heart
when showing me you care
Teach me love is a gentle art
precious and very rare
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Oh Karen...I think this last stanza sums it up so well....perfect!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2002-01-05 11:57 PM

Lovely Karen dear...as always..

~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2002-01-06 12:26 PM

Karen, I have a feeling YOU don't need oysters

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2002-01-06 02:06 AM

I hope he does step lightly

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

11 posted 2002-01-06 07:58 AM

Hey Karen hugs and a huge smile
yes tread softly , hearts are fragile
Hope

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2002-01-06 10:08 AM

Yes, Karen...it is a very good thing, belief...

well done!

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

13 posted 2002-01-06 11:24 AM

Oh you are so romantic karen. such a great poem of love. floria

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2002-01-06 09:55 PM

Karen~

This is so tender....love can be so precious....you write so beautifully....

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

15 posted 2002-01-07 02:42 AM

Startime - love is a gentle art, precious and very rare, as you have written these words. One can only hope that the other, will also know these words...

BC

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2002-01-07 04:00 AM

Yes...don't tell me you care...show me you care...James

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

17 posted 2002-01-07 07:14 AM

Ys, it is too bad someone you love does not always worry about treading all over your heart. I hope you find the one that will be soft..
Sandra

GhostWriter_6
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since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

18 posted 2002-01-07 07:23 AM

nice nice, very nice poem indeed

GhostWriter_6
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since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

19 posted 2002-01-07 07:25 AM

the title says it all... bravo

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