Open Poetry #18 |
Flying Free |
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
you nest in the trees ever gently, you drift over hills, fields and seas riding the wind soaring on high your proud regal plumage gracing our skies you glide through the clouds and drink of the rain feathered beauty of nature you drink of her grain with wings outstretched your song filled with glee the wind at your back you're flying free copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love birds so much and always picture myself as the Singing Sparrow, twittering with joy and trying to sing loves song to the world! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, your spirit soars with love! I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Madame C, You fly like a butterfly. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sometimes I wish I was an eagle to soar so high and free over the world. I love the feel of this poem. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lyra darling girl you really do know how to write. Always you say and write the exact right thing. Utterly wonderful writing amd I love it You know this is utterly perfect don't you? It is absolutely wonderful Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I wonder what we humans would be like if we were able to just "take off" without a ticket I mean. This is such a nice poem. Kathleen-- |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Lyra - I think we all wish we could fly free like the birds do. Very peaceful and tranquil write. Nicely done. Dave |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lyra, this pleased the inner me so very much! Thank you! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Noah, Seymour and Joanna....thanks so much for your replies... I would just love to grow wings, and fly away. Wouldn't you? copyright2001 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (01-06-2002 07:42 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Dave and Karilea, thanks for replying and I am glad to have provided you with a moment of tranquility.... copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Kay and Marsha, thanks so much for your warm replies.... and yes, it would be wonderful to be able to take off and go anywhere we want without a ticket....but I wonder if we would get hijacked......perish the thought. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I write about the freedom of flight in a lot of poems. It is a style of poetry I try to create. It is where the flight within us will lead us. It is in the beauty that the wings of flight fly over us with. Nice job. [This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (01-06-2002 08:50 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hmmm I wish I could fly. I do in my dreams.. really nice Madame Chipmunk floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Floria... I also fly in my dreams... Can you imagine......a flying chipmunk? LOL copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well, humans can't fly but i hope to be an air steward someday... i will like to travel the world for a bit |
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