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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Just now---just NOW, he called my name... a cry of fear within the night. Just now, just now, I played the game. I told him all would be alright. Tell me what is wrong with me? Tell me why I bruise my knees? Before he called, I was quite free. Just now, he proved a slave of me... I wish, I wish, I were so cold to be so deaf, to be so bold, that I could listen to him cry and not feel part of me has died. Just now, he wrote the rules again... just now? I let the darkness in. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's OK to let the darkness in sometimes, as long as you remember where you put that magic flashlight, and how to use it.(and where to stick it?) |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Then may you find your candle...and may it burn brightly for you while you walk your tunnel of darkness, Lady. Enjoyed. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Just now, just now, I played the game. I told him all would be alright. Will be sending a brand new purple crayon along with that candied heart...so that you may rewrite the rules yourself! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Before he called, I was quite free. Just now, he proved a slave of me... I wish, I wish, I were so cold to be so deaf, to be so bold, that I could listen to him cry and not feel part of me has died. Just now, he wrote the rules again... just now? I let the darkness in. ========================================= *sigh* .... (yktiktyk) (tis not easy being a moth baby) (maybe we should have this tatooed on the twins) heart-hugs Some find subtlety in strangers, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity..... wow... I know this. this hit me hard. excellent writing. (((hugs))) to you |
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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
feelings of freedom pervade......lost? no no no i feel found i feel profound realization call it...... {{{Freedom}}}....Mark |
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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
feelings of freedom pervade......lost? no no no i feel found i feel profound realization call it...... {{{Freedom}}}....Mark |
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