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I'm your biggest fan
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I'm your biggest fan |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I’m your biggest fan and though I owe much more than a poem a poem is what I can give all yours to put in a frame or fold into a drawer carry with you till it yellows and fades a poem just for the sake of saying you are a door that’s always open to my heart you are a one women riot who makes me laugh when I don’t want to you write words I didn’t know I needed to hear you see the best in me when I am being much less you are my poetry |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
To be ones poetry is a very special gift to give and receive. Oh to be that lucky!! So very nicely said Duncan. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - a warm write for a special someone... BC |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Do you have any idea how much I love this? Yes, I think you do. You’ve left me speechless. Now there’s something I bet you never thought you’d hear me say!! This is beautiful Dunc, just beautiful. Thank you for this, and I will treasure it even after it yellows and fades. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what a beautiful tribute for someone special! This is great! Kathleen--(Kay) A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (01-15-2002 04:34 PM).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
making a lady swoon before she has finished her first cup of coffee..... Duncan, (sigh) so perfectly beautiful... |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Oh, this is so beautifully worded. If I were someone's poetry I'd feel so complimented! To be an inspiration like that would be an honor! I hope this person realizes that! I really enjoyed reading this. Well done! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautifully said. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
If my love gave me a gift such as this, I'd be completely satisfied. Wonderfully written, I loved it! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A wonderful gift of love! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you will always be the poetry of her life too, as may her lovely words forever melt your heart! (sigh) I hope you've been printing copies of all these gorgeous poems you write, she's destined to swoon over each and every one! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooo lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine puon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Well, I certainly do miss your work, Sir. Not that you haven't been writing. I've just been absent.  This is wonderful, and I know just that someone I could dedicate this poem to. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I think a poem is quite enough and wonderful to give a lady duncan, nice poem floria |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cowboy...... I bet every woman here wishes this was for her.....oh wait, maybe it's just me wishing that  loved this with all that you are... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ 'a poem just for the sake of saying you are a door that’s always open to my heart you are my poetry' Yes ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Exquisite! *~coco~* |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
this is the kind of stuff I should write for a lady, I hope she liked it, I'd fall flat on my face if I tried something like this, but you seem to be doing fine!!! Robert |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Duncan...this is wonderful....very lovely! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Duncan, it's nice to see someone special appreciated like this. Sandra |
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Casidy Junior Member
since 2002-01-27
Posts 36The Heart of Texas |
Thank you for sharing this. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very nicely written, like where this one ends up. Great Work Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, You are on a role! Wow...I like this a lot. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this is lovely....... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
*bump*  |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
This was wonderful, terrific, great, amazing!!! Such a beautiful love poem and I really think the structure added to it. Thnks for sharing I'm going to print this one out and hang it up and hopefull it will inspire me -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I am sure she feels very special indeed! Very sweet and romantic Duncan, nicely done! |
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