Open Poetry #18 |
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Did You Hear |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA ![]() |
Did you hear …… Prattling tongues have often wagged and spread this type of sordid thing. Their speculation rife with innuendo. That fleeting kiss observed in haste, a vile inculcation burned into the corp’rate grid, repeated freely for all within ear’s range. Story multiplied and amplified and heated to a frenzied pitch. A stolen glory conferred upon repeating lips which smile and knowing nods confirm with evident delight, two reputations now servile to gossip’s grand design, two lives now rent. Affection shown between platonic friends now twisted beyond reach by rumor’s bends. © Bart Breen 2001 never try to teach a pig to sing |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Plenty of that going around, unfortunately ![]() |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh yes, I did hear, and this was nice. floria ![]() Floria |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Mannnnn have i heard this once or twice or thrice before.....*s* The Liar's club meets the Rumor-Mill and definitely NOT for the faint-of-heart, huh? Well done, Bart! Yup! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Bart, I know just how you feel, it too always saddens me to see rumors go around like this only to givge others the wrong impression of someone else and bring much pain and blame to others! (sad sigh) So sad but powerfully expressed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bart, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JBaker515![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Bart, this was well done. It really was, I think I will go and read again. ![]() ~~Jeff~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I read this once for the structure, a second time for the rhyme, a third time for the sonnet, and a fourth time, for the reason... well done Sir! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A sad state of affairs, turned into a great poem, Bart. ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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