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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan 
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It would be such a wonder to see from this height to look down from the sky through the clouds, grey and white glimpsing our home from this point of view our planet of birth with it's atomosphere, blue hanging so peacefully in the sky who ever would guess that this pretty world would hear so many cries would anyone think that this globe, blue and green would be the site of so many war scenes all women are sisters all men are brothers the terror must end we must love one another we must end all the terror fear must be abolished if we don't live in peace it will all be demolished |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
AMEN, THAT IS THE BEST I CAN SAY TO THIS. AND A REMARKABLE POEM WITH SO MUCH TRUTH.  floriaFloria |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Lyra, Good people keep saying this. Bad people keep tearing things apart. I'm with you. Nan |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Lyra Full of truth!Such a beautiful planet filled with such ugly people.This poem needs to be displayed across the world.Loved it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, We had the same thought. Good write. |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Lyra, wonderfully thought out and presented. Great message with a smooth flow. Enjoyed it. Cheryl |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Lyra,wonderful poem and I agree with everything in it.   TAKE CARE!Juanita |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lyra, Painfully true! Oh for a permanent solution. Well, there is One...Thanks. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Lyra, this is so very heartbreaking but hopeful, it breaks my heart to see us all hurting one another and I pray we can all make love and harmony between each other and light the world with sunshine of peace! (kiss on cheek) I join you in your prayers for this simple creed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Don't you know there is a beautiful earth out tonight and God is enjoying the sight Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I must say that I am delighted to have a wonderful sister like you We can't let the evil people in this world take over! (hugs) |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
How true! Bravo on an excellent piece! |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Madam Chipmunkers: Only above can we be the objective observer of peace and see how small petty differences are. When we learn not to enforce our will on others, we maybe will then glimpse peace. I am glad i 'stared' at this poetic gem, tho! tSR ~with admiration~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
As Christ said: "A new command I give you: Love one another. As I have loved you, so you must love one another." NIV John 13:34 We must all learn to unconditionally Love one another and teach others, especially our children to Love, unconditionally! We need to release all of our negative feelings, hurts, pain and sorrow, to free our souls and open them to Love. Love IS CONTAGIOUS!! But it needs to be unconditional! Thanks for reminding us! ((Madame Chipmunk)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Lyra...how true..you couldnt have said it any better. WONDERFUL!! ~~Jeff~~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Floria...thanks so much for your support...now we have to remember to follow that advice.  Nan and Stevie...I agree, the world is beautiful its some of the people that are ugly......but, not all of the people. Most are still beautiful.  Sy, Cheryl and Juanita...thanks for your replies and I'm glad you agree.  Larry and Noah...thanks, and you are right...it is sad that we even have to search for a solution for this problem copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Interloper...thanks so much, I'll have to go to the moon so I can see the beautiful earthshine.  Joanna...Its so nice that we have so many wonderful sisters. Dulcinea and ShadowRider...thanks so much for your admiration and your replies  Noah...thanks for your reply. As you know, I am not Christian...but I do agree with you about love being unconditional.  Cheryl and JBaker....thanks for replying and I'm glad you enjoyed.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
If only poetry could make it true.... |
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